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Father Al Takes a Vacation: Book One (Father Al’s Voyage of Discovery Trilogy) and
Father Al Celebrates a Birthday Milestone: Book II
by T. H. Pine
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Starts off with a good idea …. worn out priest seeks change of life … goes on a nude cruise (through space) It actually delivers the plot line in the end.
However I found the detailed description of the theology and the actual words of the littany went on too long. Later in the story I found the dialogue getting a little bit too childlike.
It probably deserve a 4* rating but it left me unconvinced.

Then book two gets worse and worse ….. Childish dialogue, no real plot sorry 65% read I gave it up!
Awful 
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Reviewed by Ted Bun  Dec 2017
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